Comments on the comparison contrast essay

Yes, it is. Analogy is used as a technique in the introduction.
Ancient Greece and Ancient Babylonia have more similarities than differences.
There are a lot of similarities between these two countries, but the thesis has stated it clearly.
The pattern is comparison and contrast, focusing mostly on the similarities.
It’s coherent enough as transition words such as” both” are used, but it could have been more dynamic if a variety of traditions were used.
Yes they are giving us information about the similarities and differences of the two countries.
Yes I believe that the subject has been adequately discussed.
It is logical because it’s restating the thesis statement.
In my opinion some of the tenses must be checked again.